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leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-09-09 01:45 PM


confusing
through the blur of tears
your brown eyes seem so clear
how can you be stable
when I so easilly fall apart
confusing
how I'm so calm in your precense
and don't feel love and yet
when I get home and fall into bed
I feel you more, not less
confusing
how your scent attracts me
bee to flower
shore to sea
confusing


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Inanothertime
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since 2001-06-29
Posts 72

1 posted 2001-09-10 02:41 AM


Very nicely done! I really like this!
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
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2 posted 2001-09-10 02:35 PM


Certainly love can be confusing.  Part of its charm.  Joyce
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