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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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I Love You More A poet once penned immortal ways to count sweet love. Song weavers have listened and wove the ways into verse and rhyme. Love, sweet love has shimmered like light on distant shore. With sweet love our guidance man has touched the divine! Yet in all these expressions, these moments there is one unopened, never opened door. Tis the ways I love you, my lady ‘cause with all that has been sang or wrote... I still love you more! I love you more! Yeah baby, I love you more! more than Mama’s love baked bread. more than cookies fresh from oven. more than puppies breath, or kittens kiss. more than all that’s ever been said! I love you more, oh my love! more than sails full with wind. more than mountains silver grandeur. more than any secret sin, or best friend! Yes, my darling! More than coffee in my cup. More than a feast fit for kings. I love you more than life itself. I love you my lady, more than all these things! Tramp Poet: once a scooter tramp no choice about poet... [This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (edited 09-02-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
More than coffee in your cup?! Now that's some serious love! LOL Very sweet poem, Daniel! |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Lucky lady!! Really touching love poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ Hmmmmm ! I'm with Denise on that 'coffee' thang~ Sounds suspicious to me ...  But ... I'll buy this with a sigh~ 'Love, sweet love has shimmered like light on distant shore. With sweet love our guidance man has touched the divine!' Delightful~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I agree with Trillium, lucky lady. What a delightful read this morning. How upbeat Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice. How lucky she, the lady who is the recipient of this adoration. Joyce |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a lucky lady! To be loved above all else and be the subject of a lovely poem, from such a loving soul |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful!!!!! and congrats!! on your award |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
It's sweet; what love has done for you! A very good read! |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thnak you each for your kind encouragement and input! and about the award... i posted a congratulations for Marge in announcements and have yet to see it appear on the page... in case you didn't know our Marge won top honors at Artgally's fall/winter poetry competition! http://www.artgally.com/cswpoetry/index2.htm (click on winners in top-left frame) I am indeed honored to be on the same page... thanks again, my friends and co-conspirators! Tramp (aka Daniel) Tramp Poet: once a scooter tramp no choice about poet... [This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (edited 09-04-2001).] |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Daniel... I hope your subject has had the honor to read such a beautifully penned poem......  Ranea |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Tramp Poet, To identify what love is to each individual is almost impossible. You have to be there to experience it. I wrote one many years ago trying to convey my love about the everyday things. Loved your poem. Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Congratulations on your placement in the Artgally contest! I just found out about it and know this must be very rewarding for you! Nice job! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thank you very much! Tramp Poet: |
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