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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-08-31 11:13 PM






Look For Wonders

Have you seen a comet fly
Or watched a star fall from the sky?
It always fills me with delight.
As though I'm privy to a sight
Reserved for special moments when
The cosmic forces meet and then,
Something happens that is rare,
For anyone who's looking there.
Aurora Borealis meets
Criteria for just such feats
And geysers gushing from the ground,
To overwhelm with sight and sound.

Have you seen a breaching whale
And watched it splash it's mighty tail?
It's power and it's mystery,
One of the secrets of the sea.
Our channeled lives, like rivers bent
On reaching oceans, mostly spent
On mundane activities,
Blessed with spectacles like these.
So every day, I try to be
Aware of life's perfidity,
But look for wonders as I pass
And four-leaf-clover in the grass!


Betty Lou Hebert
Published by Drury's Publishing in "Best Writer's of 1996"



[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 08-31-2001).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2001-08-31 11:20 PM


Very good Betty Lou! If we're not looking for the right things we'll miss them, that's for sure.
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2 posted 2001-09-01 12:14 PM


I haven't seen many of the things you mention, but you do remind me to be sure to take notice of all the little things I see. Thanks for the reminder, and great poetry.

Tracey

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3 posted 2001-09-01 12:20 PM


Betty you really do have a zest for living.  You seem to find all the wonders of this life.  This is beautiful.  Joyce

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4 posted 2001-09-01 01:35 AM


BettyLou~
I just love the rhythm to your verse~
Wonderfully done~

'Have you seen a breaching whale
And watched it splash it's mighty tail?
It's power and it's mystery,
One of the secrets of the sea.'


And ... this IS a sight I've seen~
Majestic, with a beauty all it's own.
Each day life gives us so many things to take notice of~
Thank you for sharing~
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-09-01 04:52 AM


Simply Maaaaavelous!!! Dahling!!
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6 posted 2001-09-01 06:29 PM


Denise and Tracey:  Thank you both for your nice comments.  I appreciate them.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2001-09-01 06:30 PM


Dear Joyce:  Thank you for reading and for your nice comments.  I do find much to wonder at and marvel too, in daily life.

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-09-01 06:31 PM


Marge:  Thanks for all your encouragement!

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2001-09-01 06:33 PM


Inanothertime:  Thank you!  (are you really Billy Crystal incognito??)

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2001-09-03 02:49 AM


Betty; The wonder and majesty is so alive in this grand poem! I too am grateful for the gift of a child's wonder in the great and small gifts of each moment! Ellie

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11 posted 2001-09-04 03:02 AM


Always take time to smell the flowers  : )
Beautiful!

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12 posted 2001-09-04 10:07 PM


ellie:  Thank you so much for your nice comments. There is so much to marvel at isn't there?

Betty Lou Hebert

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13 posted 2001-09-04 10:08 PM


Thank you Zinsser.

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2001-09-04 10:30 PM


Trillium...

I was just telling my children when we were walking through the woods this weekend how often people fail to stop and listen and see all the wonderful sights and sounds around them.....I think I'll share this with them.

Ranea

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15 posted 2001-09-05 01:04 AM


Ranea:  Thank you very much for your nice comments and I would be so pleased to have you share my poem with your children.

Betty Lou Hebert

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16 posted 2001-09-06 07:39 AM


I enjoy your thoughts and wonders.

Wonder-full read.

Melton


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17 posted 2001-09-07 12:10 PM


The rhythm
the flow
the wondrous glow
of words
cascading down
the page
enveloping my thoughts
re-enforcing my dreams

thanks Trillium!

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18 posted 2001-09-07 12:40 PM


Melton:  Thanks!

Midnitesun: I enjoyed your poem!  Thanks.

Betty Lou Hebert

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