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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-08-31 03:09 AM

Cadence of crickets
summers ending symphony
waken autumns dream

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-08-31 03:29 AM

Ellie~
You do these Haiku so nicely~
This is simply lovely~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-08-31 03:35 AM

Yes, your midnight music is beautiful!
And here is a morning tune for you:

Raucous ravens speak
Morning messages so deep
Gaw! Gaw! Gaw! Gaw! Gaw!

Midnitesun

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2001-08-31 10:43 AM

Good read.
We finally got some rain in S. Tx. and it feels like autumn.

Melton

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-08-31 09:52 PM

...and it's about time, that's all I have to say about summer ending....hehehe.....this is beautiful, Ellie!

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-08-31 10:58 PM

nice idea, Ellie...

stripe-furred trash bandit
the sound of claws upon steel
searching for treasure

People call me a madman, but I'm not mad at anyone.
~ Cat Rapes Dog, "Aquarius"

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-08-31 11:02 PM

ellie: Another gem from your pen!

Betty Lou Hebert

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-09-01 08:01 PM

Oh this was just awesome! I really loved it! Great job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

8 posted 2001-09-01 09:24 PM

Lovely haiku.. I have been hearing crickets lately too.. they must be singing an autumn song.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-09-05 12:14 PM

Ellie ~ This is by far your best haiku. This is so soothing and lovely! I rarely save haikus in my libray, but, this one deserves to be there

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

10 posted 2001-09-05 12:46 PM

This is a great haiku Ellie. Although my house seems to be infested with the crickets and right now I'm not sure how lovely their music sounds.

Dawn

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-09-09 04:23 PM

this is a beautiful haiku, and I hear the midnight music

Charisma

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