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leafseranade
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0 posted 2001-08-23 05:16 PM

dandilion dust
touches my lips
feeling the freedom
passing me by
wanting to catch a ride
to go out on the sky
blowing in the wind
with no destination
in mind
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Denise
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1 posted 2001-08-23 06:36 PM

Very lovely poem and welcome to Passions and to The Corner Pub, leafserenade!
ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2001-08-23 08:23 PM

wonderful thoughts and welcome to passions!
leafseranade
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3 posted 2001-08-23 10:56 PM

thanks!
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4 posted 2001-08-25 10:33 AM

I love drinking dandelion wine in winter.It is the golden sun of summer in liquid form.Welcome to passions.

paladin
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5 posted 2001-08-25 12:20 PM

A new voice.  Nice to hear from you.  Joyce
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6 posted 2001-08-25 04:54 PM

take me with you

very nice
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7 posted 2001-08-25 06:57 PM

Dandelions are really pretty.  Too bad they are looked on as a weed!  I liked your poem!

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8 posted 2001-08-26 03:51 AM

You mean I'm not the only one who likes those dandies? I hate it when people spray weed-killers on them! I like the way you 'tied' them to freedom. Thanks for a fun read.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 08-26-2001).]
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