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Revitalised Emotions
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0 posted 2001-08-07 06:43 AM


Beneath lowered lids
the jaundice mists
belie the masquerade,
Listless, lifeless,
totally oblivious,
AFRAID
Silent expletives inwardly burn
soothing suffocating screams
trapped in a world of paranoid nightmares
with only distant memories of dreams!

[This message has been edited by Revitalised Emotions (edited 08-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Linda Mason - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2001-08-07 07:21 AM


Very impressive.
Welcome to PIP.

Melton

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2 posted 2001-08-07 09:42 AM


Welcome to this friendly corner.  You have a way with words.  Joyce
wpwpoet
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3 posted 2001-08-07 11:06 AM


an essence of souls' convulsing eruption...

great poem.wpwpoet

Krawdad
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4 posted 2001-08-07 01:50 PM


Oh, the difficulty in trying to communicate . . . and the fear!
Nice intro piece and WELCOME TO THE JOINT!!!

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"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry


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5 posted 2001-08-07 06:10 PM


This is great!  I enjoyed very much!

Welcome to Passions, please check your email for a special welcome.

Maree  

Denise
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6 posted 2001-08-07 06:56 PM


Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed reading this and look forward to more from you!
Red_Feather
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7 posted 2001-08-08 12:40 PM


Bravo. A powerful read. Brought strong feelings back to me from times past. Shell shocked eyes always betray a brave face. I look forward to more.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Kicking Kim
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8 posted 2001-08-08 02:11 AM


Great poem Mum, see you at home later!!  Nice1



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9 posted 2001-08-08 04:52 PM


Welcome to the site and hope to see more of your work.

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2001-08-09 09:02 AM



Welcome to Passions!  I hope you find yourself totally entranced with the poets and passages yet to discover here in the blue pages....

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