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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2001-07-31 01:22 PM


~~~Re: here it is~~~
Didn't Brigham Young say the very same?

hey bro,
been wonderin if y'all was still suckin air.
been down in the valley?
how'd my yard look down there?

Seems we be passin
like scooters out at midnight
a finger, maybe a nod.

Sweet, wind. Yes indeed.
People of the, nay clan of the Wind
Sweet, pure, wind.

Odd how we go... sometimes
flat, rollin; sometimes
cold and blowin; sometimes
maybe burnin n turnin...sometimes.

Don't ya love that Biblical cat
sayin, for everything a season
ain't nothing new under the sun.

As you can see, my brother
this simple email has become
crafted just for you.

Shore good to hear your fingertips
we need to hook up, maybe Christmas
rubber side down.

praying for you,
     Daniel




    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-07-31 02:14 PM


Hope I''m not treading where I should not be.  What an interesting epistle.  Joyce
Tramp Poet
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2 posted 2001-07-31 03:23 PM


Not at all, Joyce!
I'm glad you picked up on the intimacy...
was hoping this message to a bro
would strike folks as a peek into
a private note of brotherhood and
encouragement.  Thanks for the imput!

    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

Trillium
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3 posted 2001-07-31 05:08 PM


This is certainly different and while I don't follow all of the thought processes, it is fun to read.

Betty Lou Hebert

Tramp Poet
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4 posted 2001-08-04 03:20 AM


no problem Trill...
i was looking for art and obviously
folks here aren't seeing it...
this came from a street biker
point of view, and that world isn't
pretty by any stretch of the imagination.
i wanted to create "a message for a friend"
that would transcend the mundane.
~~~sigh~~~
thank you for the imput...

(lol my darling WW wants me to spell
imput correctly and of course i refuse.
Oh Goodie...looks like a poem coming up!)

    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

Denise
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5 posted 2001-08-07 08:21 PM


This is fantastic, Daniel! Yep, I knew you were talking from a biker's view, and very well I might add. This is far from mundane.

input, Daniel, input....you've got a bit of a stubborn streak going there, don't ya?!  

Tramp Poet
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6 posted 2001-08-10 03:32 AM


roflm-bootie off
yeppers D, ya might say that now...
stubborn? nahhh
just inflexable and poor to bend for convention...
wait a cotton pickin minute
i think i just agreed

anyway thanks for the imput

lol  

    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

Denise
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7 posted 2001-08-10 06:49 PM


ROFL  
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