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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Slipped Right Through Hard to see heart strings sometimes Not like a spider’s web opaque and sticky But crystal clear fragile as a dream and slick like silk Caught for a time, suspended then slipped right through No fatal bite by the widow but still. . .the fall [This message has been edited by wandering glider (edited 07-28-2001).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is nice. The heart's a slippery place. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very cleverly done. I enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I like it. Not fatal, but it still hurts. Melton |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
As Zdalimit said - not fatal but it sure does hurt. Sometimes it feels fatal. Good write. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
but still. . .the fall Ahhhh yes the fall ..... Great write WG  enjoyed Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 07-29-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great writing, indeed! Well done! |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
This is truly beautiful! We can only hope for a soft landing... |
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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
this is great! thanks so much for sharing.... something we all know all too well but you describe so wonderfully.... mistyrose~* |
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