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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-07-28 11:53 AM


Captured beauty held
shall not survive the prison
Love is letting go

Beauty thus to soar
freedoms flight to grow in love
shall return in time

So to then to heal
Mother and child shall renew
Love on wings of truth

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-28 12:32 PM


Lots of wisdom here.  joyce
Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-07-28 05:47 PM


Ellie~

You write this beautifully, as usual, you impress  

Melissa~

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3 posted 2001-07-29 02:27 AM


Well done here. Another wonderful piece by you!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

2dalimit
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4 posted 2001-07-29 09:22 AM


Excellent!!! When love is given, love returns. Good write.

Melton

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5 posted 2001-07-29 09:33 AM


Very good.  Truly, love is letting go.
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6 posted 2001-07-29 02:23 PM


This is so true and one of the hard things a mother must do.  The returns are great however.

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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7 posted 2001-07-29 07:11 PM


Excellent as always, Ellie!
Inanothertime
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8 posted 2001-08-02 07:47 AM


Ah yes; as the cycle of life spins us 'round once more! Great stuff!
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