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Nights Song Haiku |
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Sweet hushed zephyr song Whistling through the ancient oaks Evening lullaby |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This sounds quite peaceful. I really liked the last line. Very well written. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love that first line~ So beautiful, Dennis, it's one of your best! Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I like this very much. Deb |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love your Haikus This one is lovely Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Gorgeous, Dennis! Maree |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Wind song is always beautiful, when it's gentle, as it feels it must be in your lovely haiku. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Dennis! Very lovely! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Another excellent Haiku. Thanks, Melton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Lovely ... just lovely~ When circumstances allow, please come back and *gift* us with another beauty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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