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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2001-07-26 11:38 AM


Sweet hushed zephyr song
Whistling through the ancient oaks
Evening lullaby

© Copyright 2001 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-07-26 02:40 PM


This sounds quite peaceful. I really liked the last line. Very well written.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-07-26 05:12 PM


I love that first line~
So beautiful, Dennis, it's one of your best!  

Melissa~

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-26-2001).]

BloomingRose
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3 posted 2001-07-26 06:18 PM


I like this very much.

Deb  

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2001-07-27 07:46 AM


I love your Haikus
This one is lovely
Liz

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5 posted 2001-07-27 05:21 PM


Gorgeous, Dennis!

Maree  

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6 posted 2001-07-27 06:33 PM


Wind song is always beautiful, when it's gentle, as it feels it must be in your lovely haiku.

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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7 posted 2001-07-27 07:16 PM


This is lovely, Dennis! Very lovely!
2dalimit
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8 posted 2001-07-29 08:48 AM


Another excellent Haiku.
Thanks,

Melton

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9 posted 2005-06-17 09:22 AM


Dennis~
Lovely ... just lovely~

When circumstances allow, please come back and *gift* us with another beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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