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Corner Pub #2

Broken

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

0 posted 2001-07-26 07:25 AM

He stands before me in shocked dispair,
the pain in his eyes too much to bear.
The love of his life is walking away,
he desperately longs for her to stay.

He is broken.

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-07-26 08:22 AM

So sad..so many broken hearts. I am so glad there is one who can mend them.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-07-26 09:12 AM

Very poignant. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2001-07-27 05:50 PM

People suffer so much for love! Very touching poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

4 posted 2001-07-28 12:03 PM

This begs for another verse, or nine.
There must be more to this story. If not, create one!

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//

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2001-07-29 08:58 AM

I'm with W G. Point is clear, but, could there be more?

Melton

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

6 posted 2001-07-29 09:28 AM

Thanks everyone for your comments. Actually I've been trying to add to this for quite a while but can't seem to find anything that fits. Will keep at it. Again - thanks.

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