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Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-07-24 06:18 PM



You Gave Me a Gift

You gave me a gift , a small token of love
A music box chiming what I’m fondest of
Soft melodies filling the air with delight
A present of love on that first moonlit night

You sent me a birthday wish, one special day
A rainbow of colors in floral bouquet
A sign that you miss me in petals of blue
And roses that quietly say, “I love you”

You placed in my hand a small box wrapped in white
A diamond that lit up the day and the night
Then in a small chapel you offered your hand
And a gift made of silver, a small wedding band

You loved me and cared for me, honored my life
We wandered together as husband and wife
You gave me the joy of devotion and truth
Wrapped in the balance of wisdom and youth

You gave me a gift, a small token of love
And asked God to bless us from heaven above
Wrapped in a package, a blanket of blue
A beautiful son who’s the image of you

Ellizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 07-24-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Trillium
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1 posted 2001-07-24 06:49 PM


Elizabeth:  This is so heart-warming and beautiful!  You are an outstanding poet! Your work beongs in a book of it's own.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2001-07-24 07:44 PM


Yes, I guess with Trillium you are a wonderful poet and this is a great post.  Joyce
Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-07-24 08:02 PM



Oh Liz, this is just so beautiful and tender~
Into my library this goes!

Melissa~

Denise
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4 posted 2001-07-24 09:12 PM


Elizabeth, this is so beautiful! So very very touching!
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-07-25 01:23 AM


Just lovely, LadyLizzie~
Tenderly portrayed.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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