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Inanothertime
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since 2001-06-29
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0 posted 2001-07-20 03:08 AM


In my head
There is mass confusion
All of my beliefs
Only an illusion
      Where do I go from here

All that was comfort
Comes tumbling down
My entire world
Now lies; a mere mound
      Where do I go from here

A fluttering of the soul
An instant, a trace
A Rembrandt, a Mozart, a Frost
Inspires reassuring grace
      Still; where do I go from here

From deep within
There comes a spark
A point, a place
From which to embark
      I know where I go from here


© Copyright 2001 Inanothertime - All Rights Reserved
Songbird
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1 posted 2001-07-20 02:32 PM


I liked the way you penned that decisive moment. Moments of reflection usually bring answers. Nice work.
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2 posted 2001-07-20 05:28 PM


Oh, I am glad you found your way.  Very nice.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-07-20 06:32 PM


When we are at our lowest ebb, the only way to go is "up".

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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4 posted 2001-07-20 08:31 PM


Welcome to Passions! Very nice poem. Please check your email for a special welcome!
vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-07-23 03:28 PM



Inanothertime-
   I like this LOTS!!  
   Very nicely done..

   Welcome to Passions!!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Inanothertime
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since 2001-06-29
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6 posted 2001-07-25 02:59 AM


Thank you all for the kind words, and the warm welcome. I've enjoyed reading all of you, and I like it here, at the pub-thanks again!
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