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Poetic Hearts Tanka

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-07-18 10:37 PM

Poetic Hearts
Tanka

When two hearts entwine
'tis the bond of poem fine
your thoughts sail with mine
in magic of verse and rhyme
cherished by soul for all time

By Melissa P. Monette

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-18-2001).]

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2001-07-18 10:41 PM

Oh I love this!
It is so sweet!
It is Great!
Nicely done!!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-07-19 04:07 AM

This truly was a wonderful Tanka! I liked it a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2001-07-19 11:17 AM

Beautiful! Simply Beautiful! Dennis :^)

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-07-19 11:52 AM

Thank you Voiceless, Javier and Dennis - this is dedicated to all the poets here at Passions

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-23 03:21 PM

Melissa-
   Very nicely done..
   I like LOTS..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2001-07-23 05:57 PM

ahhhh absolutely lovely

Maree.

"little miss understood
little misunderstood"

~Marry me Jane~

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-07-24 08:07 PM

Vicky and Maree - Thank you

I'm glad that you enjoyed this little dedication~

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