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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Wind and Eagles Upon the crags where storms are made, The fierce winds sing their serenade. Eagles scream as they swiftly rise To ride the torrents in the skies And though they can't be seen from here, Somewhere in the atmosphere, Riding a river of cold air, The eagles feel at home up there. The earth is but a speck below, But when they feel it's time to go, They fold their wings and plummet down To swoop above the forest's crown And catch the wind to rise once more, To brush the frame of Heaven's door. I wonder what it's like to be So powerful, so wild and free? Wind and eagles call to me! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a beautiful image you have penned here Trillium ~ I swear I see that eagle soar!!! Simply beautiful. Bonnie |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Betty you are surely a child of nature. You capture it so well. Love, Joyce |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Once again you have painted a beautiful picture of nature at its best. Melton |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
This is simply awesome, and majestic-- and lofty in the way you have captured the experience, and share the wonder of it all with us. I think this a a most excellent poem, David P.S. Believe me, I am being Honest! Every Day's a Blessing |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ What a majestically portrayed vision you've shared. Indeed, it soars ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Bonnie: Thanks for your nice comments and I'm glad the poem pleased you. Joyce: I guess you're right! I enjoy everything in nature so much. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: Thank you and I do appreciate your nice comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
David: I am flattered that you enjoyed this poem so much and appreciate your honesty. Thank you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I always appreciate your comments and thank you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
To fly like the eagle would be great, wouldn't it?! Great poem! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Loved this so poetic. Loved the style and enjoyed the images. You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
The Imagery in this is brilliant! Great write! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
This soars with grace and power - beautiful!  |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: Yes, it would be a wonderful feeling to be able to soar through the air like and eagle. They always look as if they are enjoying themselves a lot! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Moondust: So glad you liked this and appreciate your nice comments. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Voiceless and Illusion: I appreciate the nice remarks from both of you. Thanks! Betty Lou Hebert |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Trillium- Wonderful write...beautifully done! Enjoyed it much! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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