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a new life

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

0 posted 2001-07-12 12:39 PM

taking shape
a life that
has been without
spent dreaming
of treasure
never known...


              Until now,
              with shaky breath
              in awe
              upon the future
              my fingertips
              I lay

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-07-12 11:09 AM

This takes my mind up and away. Very good. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-07-12 06:03 PM

This opened images in my mind. I hope it's the future you've wanted!

Betty Lou Hebert

Inanothertime
Member

since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

3 posted 2001-07-12 08:32 PM

impressive, and extreemly refreshing-have a good time!

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

4 posted 2001-07-17 10:20 PM

Yeah i also feel this way at the moment, its very well written.

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

5 posted 2001-07-18 11:15 PM

wow
it makes you think
i like it..

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2001-07-20 11:35 PM

              "Until now,
              with shaky breath
              in awe
              upon the future
              my fingertips
              I lay"

Very light and refreshing, especially love the lines above

Maree

"little miss understood
little misunderstood"

~Marry me Jane~

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

7 posted 2001-07-21 08:48 AM

Excellent.
Dreams can be shaped. And the future does lay at your fingertips.

Melton

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