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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dancing on cool night, Fluttering against the light, Atract to things bright. You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Attracted to light On this Moonless o'ercast night Porch lamp provides warmth Moonbeams radiate |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely. Joyce |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
I realize this to be unintentional, but this instantly made me think of kids, pot, and conveniance stores. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is indeed a Moth Haiku lol. I really liked how you described this here. Nice!  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dennis - Nice one  Joyce - thank u Red_Feather - u mayb onto something there. Dopey - Thank u too You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I really like this! Lovely in simplicity with a perfect rhyme scheme Melissa~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
The moths are over taking my house! So I understand this all to well! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Moon Dust- Very nicely done.. Enjoyed. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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