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mistyrose
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-06-26 02:48 PM



i ......alone
have words to speak
a thoughtful line
to say
i......speak
alone
in this world,
of my own
pretending
to know
the love of you

i......alone
know
how each day begins
and prospers-and ends
without you

how can one live
without air how
can one cry
without tears how
can one love when
loveless

i......alone,

know...

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Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19
Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea
1 posted 2001-06-26 10:37 PM


A good write my friend. Those of us who are made to love will sometimes love alone, but it is better than not being capable at all.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
2 posted 2001-06-27 12:56 PM


This is a touching poem.  There are so many things in life we must do alone. Sometimes loving is one of them.

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
3 posted 2001-06-27 07:32 AM


I'm sure I'm not...alone, when I say, you have penned a very thoughtful piece. I hope love comes your way soon.
Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
4 posted 2001-06-27 11:16 PM


You are never alone.  Especially in that feeling.  Nicely writ.
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2001-06-30 01:36 AM


I echo Wobbly Head Bob  

Maree

mistyrose
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
6 posted 2001-07-02 06:25 PM


thanks for all your kind responses
it reminds me why
i even try to do this at all....
*hugs* to each of you

amistyrose~*

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