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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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0 posted 2001-06-24 07:54 PM



In time this ache will ease I know,
the sleepless nights will finally go,

reminders of what used to be,
will fade into dim memory,

the chaos of this trying time,
will steady to routine sublime,

someday I’ll learn to smile again,
although I can’t predict just when,

the heart will heal, the mind repair,
I’ll cease to think of you not there,

these days are spent in shadows deep,
no more sweet rendezvous to keep,

collect the pieces, one by one,
until the tears no longer run,

somewhere the sun is shining bright,
someday I know I’ll be all right.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2001-06-24 08:32 PM


Another beauiful piece it is as well.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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2 posted 2001-06-24 09:09 PM


Yes with your attitude you will be okay.  Sorry this happens to nice people.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-06-24 10:37 PM


Sad but hopeful for the future. Well done.

Betty Lou Hebert

Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19
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The Vagabond Sea
4 posted 2001-06-26 11:53 PM


Well written pegasus, there is a strange energy in that state of mind, you presented it well.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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5 posted 2001-06-27 07:06 AM


I'm sorry some people go through this. Very well done. Good piece and good attitude.  

Melton

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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
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Virginia, USA
6 posted 2001-06-27 11:09 PM


I'm so jealous of your work!  You say what I mean the way I really mean to say it...and, if I may say so, well said my friend!  I felt every line.
Dark Angel
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7 posted 2001-06-30 01:41 AM


reminders of what used to be,
will fade into dim memory,


I await this day!

A wonderful write indeed.

Maree

Gypsy
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since 2001-06-15
Posts 20
VA Coast
8 posted 2001-07-01 02:12 AM


I found this very beautiful although it is about sadness. Your experience and honesty shines through as if a spirit to heal not only yourself but others. I really loved this. Oh and especially the Frost clip...most likely one of the greatest poets to ever live....

"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference."

Thank you for sharing and my heart and prayers go out to you.  

To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson

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