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Gypsy Junior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 20VA Coast |
I tossed and turned with that sweet lingering scent- The morning was fast approaching. Desire was a bad cold as I lusted over him carefully. Sin had become the greatest of depths, as I wedeged myself against its movement. Daybreak laughed at me. Laughed silently... Still, the shadow arose- its heart beating wildly inside me. One continent with too many mountains washed over me. With outstretched arms, I felt the warmth fiterating through, as if unaware of my sorrow. For years I had hide under its very blanket and now I was smoothering in my truth. Afraid that scent trailing off, would leave without my consent. As if- that ocean held all my regrets and sank deeper with each month that pass. Was I unable to swim alone? Unable to move without the past... To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, Gypsy! Great writing! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yanno, I have never been able to say enough how much I enjoy your work. It is an honor to have you here, my friend.  Your descriptions always carry me right along. I love this.  |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for the great read. ~Krissie I'm the answer to a question no one asked a sleepless dreamer, destroyed by passion |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
very very nice, interesting images that you conjure, the whole continent wiht too many mountains washing over thing was great, i really enjoyed that, i also enjoyed the introspection and the steamy side of this piece "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Gypsy Junior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 20VA Coast |
Thank you all for replying...this is one of my favorites, except for one in the adult forum  hee hee. To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson |
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