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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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0 posted 2001-06-22 09:36 PM


A stroll in the park
In the extended evening light,
Is my Summer's Joy
My happy Delight.

When before, darkness prevailed
And the fears set their cold dark markers,
Now in sleeveless, cool attire
I gladly forget the parkas.

And now, as I stroll all Nature stirs
In a cacaphony symphony,
Delightful, different sights and sounds adrift
Which enliven my senses within me.

Ah, for a healthful, fresh air stroll
To experience the world, not gone wrong,
To feel inspired by God's beautiful world
And enchanted by Summer's sweet Song!

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

© Copyright 2001 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2001-06-22 10:24 PM


and enchanting is this poem of your skills at bringing this delightful summer strole alive for everyone.  wonderful, David!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-06-22 10:46 PM


Lovely summer evening strolls.  I miss those.  It turns so cool here in the evenings.  Joyce
Dennis L. White
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Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2001-06-23 09:18 AM


David,
  Ah yes, a sweet summer song indeed! You have captured the moment! Good Job!
Dennis :^)

Denise
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4 posted 2001-06-23 11:13 AM


This is beautiful, David! Lovely!
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Member Patricius
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5 posted 2001-06-24 12:58 PM


David:  I could picture exactly the kind of evening you meant.  Very descriptive poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

AniKay83
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6 posted 2001-06-24 02:02 AM


Good poem, very sweet and uplifting.
~Krissie

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~Angela Pizza

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