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pegasus111
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0 posted 2001-06-11 09:02 AM


sleek silhouette tensed
sensitive nose tests the wind
for danger’s scent-

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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2dalimit
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1 posted 2001-06-11 11:03 AM


Picturesque, and quite cautious. Nice.
Melton

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2 posted 2001-06-11 07:00 PM


I REALLY liked this one. I am in awe at how you come up with these genius filled pieces.
I loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-06-11 09:01 PM


Very nice. Joyce
Red_Feather
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4 posted 2001-06-12 11:20 PM


I too like this visual, but deer are not always so ready to bolt. Three nights ago, as i walked through the woods near my home, a deer that i could not quite lay my eyes on began to snort at me. I was apparently too close and was being asked to leave. I did.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

pegasus111
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5 posted 2001-06-13 08:37 PM


Ahhh..Red_Feather..had to be a large buck with a sizeable rack to be so bold..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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6 posted 2001-06-24 01:08 PM


sometimes i feel like that deer..
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7 posted 2001-06-24 05:58 PM


Good description of a deer poised for flight!

Betty Lou Hebert

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