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deleeme
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0 posted 2001-06-05 10:37 PM


I f Today should be my last
F or me, my days were through,

T omorrow just a "No Where Land"
O f which I'll never view--
M ay I say it Here and Now
O ur time together spent,
R eally meant a lot to me
R icher am I, by your Goodness lent.
O ur lives are but a passage brief
W e All are Terminal,

N one are given but Today
E 'en all, both great and small.
V alue comes with every day
E ach giv'n for us to find,
R ewards fore living "Presently"

C ome as the LORD designed.
O h may my life have fullness
M y every day, full to the sum,
E 'er the walks of men I cease--
S ince Tomorrow never comes!


© Copyright 2001 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
Romy
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Plantation, Florida
1 posted 2001-06-06 10:48 AM


Wow!  What a great acrostic! I'm impressed, and your message is so true..."come as the Lord designed"...live life to the fullest.
Very nice!
Debbie

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2001-06-07 06:24 AM


Dear David; Oh, Wow! You are surely a master at acrostics! This is beautiful, "Carpe Diem"... perfect message..live and laugh in the moment that God has given us! I needed to hear this today..thank you, my dear friend. Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

2dalimit
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3 posted 2001-06-08 05:22 AM


I like it. Thank you.
Melton

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4 posted 2001-06-08 06:46 PM


Rare good sense in a wonderful form.  Joyce
Denise
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5 posted 2001-06-10 04:41 PM


Very nice, David!
Dark Angel
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6 posted 2001-06-13 06:53 PM


A lovely Acrostic indeed  
I enjoyed.

Maree  

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