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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2001-06-02 01:39 AM


The equine 4H rider
Is looking so aloof.
Her horse is all spit-polished
From her mane down to her hoof.

She's next for the arena,
Her predecessor's doing fine.
Her mount is standing quietly
As they wait their turn in line.

Watching the judge so closely,
For the maneuvers he will ask.
And wondering if she and her horse
Are equal to the task.

They've done these drills perfectly
At home time after time.
Her mare is quick and nimble,
She can turn right on a dime.

She's hoping that the horse won't shy
From the carnival noise horrendous,
And wishing that her turn would come,
The pressure is tremendous.

At last the gate is opened.
She holds her head up high,
Smiles as she's been told to do
Looks the judge right in the eye.

Her mare's responding steadily
And comes to a perfect halt.
She knows if they should fail this class,
It won't be the horses fault.

The horse and rider are like one
A touch is all she'll need
To give her mount directions and
This wonderful horse will heed.

At last the judge dismisses them
And does it with a smile.
The rider knows she and her horse
Have conducted themselves with style.

She's friends with the other riders
And knows they will be trying too,
To have such a great performance
That they will win the blue.

The competition's over,
Most of the riders pass.
They applaud for her with fervor
When her horse wins "Best of Class."

She gives her horse another hug,
As she rides back into line.
Patting her steed, she whispers,
"This prize is yours not mine."

Now she is free to see the sights,
Of the exciting county fair.
Before she leaves she stables her,
And takes care of her mare.

She'll never have a better friend
Than this beautiful, gentle horse.
The two of them will go to state
And win again, of course.

By Joyce 06/01/01


© Copyright 2001 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
crazymary
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1 posted 2001-06-02 03:13 AM


hey joyce, that was a really cute poem. you described all those emotions exactly. great poem & perfect words!
Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2001-06-02 11:57 AM


Thank you crazymary and welcome to our corner.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-06-02 12:51 PM


I felt as though I were there, Joyce! Well done!
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4 posted 2001-06-03 12:36 PM


Joyce:  This brought back fond memories of watching young girls we have in our neighborhood, at the county fair.  It's always exciting when one of them wins.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-06-03 02:16 PM


I always enjoy your stories. And this one of friendship is very heartwarming.
Melton

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