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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams 
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burning, sizzling, consuming, devouring... high upon smoke smoke clouds furiously towering. blazing inferno of brilliance so bright illuminating the shadows of the dark skies tonight. this passion is scorching, beyond my control. i'm going to burn up if i don't let it go. with honey sweet moisture you share in a kiss , the raging fire can now only hissssssssss...^^^....^^.....^......- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
My goodness. This sounds too hot to handle. Joyce |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
That's my kind of fire. I like this a lot. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
loved that last line? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Derrick~ This is a brilliant little piece of writing. Dancing with vivid imagery ... Just loved the entire piece ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I liked it. It got my blood boiling. Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very creative and fun to read. Sounds like a heat wave!! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Wow! Hot love in the summer! Loved all the sounds! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
OPening a window its getting steamy in here. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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