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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
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0 posted 2001-05-31 02:22 PM


Dancing Droplets of Love

Through a meadow in thy darkest corner of mine being,
I’ve seen dancing droplets of love kissing blades of you.
If only thine illusion be a vision of futuristic harmony,
Then thy longing empty arms of us, a memory of thine past.

I wake thy morning dew droplets quietly singing our song,
Choir of angelic crickets acknowledging distance fading.
Mine soul lost within itself, lacking thine essence of truth.
Love of mine heart can thou forgive and forget thine darkness?


© Copyright 2001 Esmeralda Ponsonby - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
1 posted 2001-05-31 02:25 PM


fair maiden this is wonderfully written
some beautiful lines  

If only thine illusion be a vision of futuristic harmony,
Then thy longing empty arms of us, a memory of thine past.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-05-31 06:32 PM


Esmeralda, Thou hast created thus a poetic dream only lovers darest dream..Exquisite! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Denise
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3 posted 2001-05-31 08:28 PM


Sooooooo beautiful, Esmeralda!
FoxXena
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where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted
4 posted 2001-06-16 01:21 AM


Well...I really don't know what to say about this, but it is really powerful.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

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