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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-05-31 06:55 AM


Summer is sleeping
silently
in the arms of Morpheus.

As deep Spring
is in her fullest flower.
Awake and alive.
Her dreams fulfilled.
The long ago dreams she dreamt
in deep chill of Winter,
are a profusion of reality.

But Spring will be lulled
into her Summers slumber,
and bright mornings dawn
will call forth
the glory of Summer days.
Hazy and warm.

All of nature awakened
from Springs dream.

While Fall still sleeps,
in the warmth of Summers arms.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
1 posted 2001-05-31 02:33 PM


Summer is sleeping
silently
in the arms of Morpheus.

serene and beautiful poem.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 138

2 posted 2001-05-31 02:35 PM


Oh, how you have done such delight for our changing seasons. Through this wonderful poem you make each sound so delightful and full of all the beauty they do possess.  
Songbird
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Missouri
3 posted 2001-05-31 02:47 PM


While Fall still sleeps,
in the warmth of Summers arms

Wow, Ellie.. this is great!!

Denise
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4 posted 2001-05-31 08:21 PM


Beautifully done, Ellie!
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
5 posted 2001-06-01 06:40 AM


Ellie,
You must have sprinkled this poem with your fairy dust because it has such a mystical enchantment- your choice of words are impecible!  Well Done!
         David

            

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
6 posted 2001-06-02 04:05 PM


Very Lovely!  There's nothing more that I can say...thanks for sharing.

Debbie

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-06-02 05:57 PM


I love reading about the seasons and this felt so gratifying., thank you.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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