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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2001-05-31 03:51 AM


the Storm

Twas blackest of night
just after one am
getting off a hard days night.
Watching our world famous meteorologist
tracking tornadoes and lightning
all eve into the wee morn.

The sirens were blowing caution
my co-workers tried to keep me
my lady was waiting, praying and scared.
Tween the entrance and borrowed van
thirty, maybe thirty-five feet
arrived soaked to the skin even so.

Raining as only Oklahoma tornado can
wipers on the glass totally ineffective
driving by lightning flash and thunder roar.
Enough water on the cross streets
to come almost into the door bottoms
as the wind pushed from side to side.

Half way across town to home
the streets and buildings were dark
guided only by the trees off to the sides.
Confessing my many and varied sins
crying out for promised forgiveness
thinking about meeting Jesus face to face.

Then just as the front of the van
lifted into the air and control was lost
a feeling of peace, laughter spilled out.
Without a doubt I knew in my knower
that someone was praying for me
breaking into joyous song as the van settled.

Singing praises at the top of my voice
as the rains grew, and the wind grew
and the lightning became continuous.
The rest of the drive was more than
even worse than the bad beginning...
till I stepped into home and warm embrace.

My lady awaiting, scared and worried
just as I knew, sensed she would be
hugging fiercely as the water pooled beneath.
Thanking God together for our safety
thanking God for our love, and the others
who woke up just to pray for me.

Isn’t it funny
how we tend to seek God on our terms
only making Him time when about to lose ours?
And in His gracious, loving, complete love
He accepts us as we are, forgives us our trash
and allows us to go on...
even knowing that it is likely we will only seek Him
when next we face our end,  once again?
Selah.

    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

© Copyright 2001 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-05-31 11:19 AM


Your best yet, that I've seen.  I enjoyed this very much.  Oh, this experience would do it all right.  Scare us back to the Lord.    You knew in your knower?  That's precious.  Joyce
Denise
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2 posted 2001-05-31 08:26 PM


It's a wonder that He puts up with us. We are really just a bunch of slugs, aren't we?...and yet at the same time so 'fearfully and wonderfully made'. Fantastic poem, Daniel! I'm glad that you survived that horrible storm.
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3 posted 2001-06-01 12:28 PM


This was a great poem to read.  I could picture what you were going through.......almost.  I have never been in a tornado and I hope I never am!  Scary things that they are and dangerous!  I think God knows us so well, he forgives us our shortcomings and is glad whenever we do turn to him.

Betty Lou Hebert

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-06-03 10:48 AM


I enjoyed your depth of thought very much.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...
5 posted 2001-06-06 12:18 PM


thank you each for the imput.
lol was a very en-lightning
experience!


    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

Songbird
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6 posted 2001-06-08 06:31 PM


Enjoyed reading about your experience.. keep the faith!!
FoxXena
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7 posted 2001-06-15 04:06 PM


In short: a miracle from God

Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.
-Publilus Syrus

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