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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-05-28 06:22 PM


This is based on an event in one of my ancestors lives, when her husband left her on a homestead in Montana, to go looking for gold in the Alaska gold rush in 1898.


It's been a lonely winter here.
I've been alone and filled with fear.
Not noted for my bravery,
Yet life has called it forth from me.
I've faced the wind, the snow and cold.
My husband's gone to search for gold.
He left me here away last fall
And went to answer Mammon's call.
I've had a horse and cow to tend.
An old brown dog I count as friend.
The dugout is a gloomy place.
The window shows the snowy face
Of all the land that round here lies
Beneath the leaden sweep of skies
And even on a sunny day,
I still can't drive sad thoughts away.

I have to hang on for awhile.
There is a slowly ebbing pile
Of rice and beans, some flour too.
That has to be enough to do.
Some days I think I will go mad,
Remembering the hopes we had
When we first came to homestead here,
But by myself it's very clear,
Though hopes die hard, mine are quite dead.
Survival claims my thoughts instead.
So when it's spring, I'll make my way
Back to my family to stay.
There's nothing left except to go.
One winter is enough, I know!


Betty Lou Hebert

Published on The Poetic Link 6/26/2000

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 05-28-2001).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2001-05-28 06:29 PM


In this day and age we really have no concept of how hard life must have been back then. Great expression, Betty Lou!
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2 posted 2001-05-28 09:03 PM


I could really feel her loneliness and concerns.
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3 posted 2001-05-28 10:16 PM


Good job Betty. I often think of those pioneers with awe.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-05-29 01:03 AM


Denise, Songbird and Joyce:  Thank you all for reading and commenting.  I'm glad you all liked the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-05-29 10:20 PM


Very nice job on your poem, I enjoyed reading it!
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6 posted 2001-05-30 01:11 AM


Romy:  Thanks and I appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

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