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mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-05-26 09:42 PM

kiss me softly
in the morning
sunlight-and
hold me close
for the rest
of the day
say softly
"i love you"
in a poem
written in sand
being washed away
by the tide....

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-05-26 11:52 PM

MistyRose~
How lovely are your thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-05-27 12:41 PM

Even if the tide washes the words away, your heart will remember.

Betty Lou Hebert

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2001-05-27 07:13 AM

ooooo, so romantically delicious! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

4 posted 2001-05-27 07:28 AM

Yes, constructive critiques.. You know, how I really love the sea, misty, I go there sometimes by myself, reading every tide that splashes against the rocks.... it's a short, but really beautiful poem of yours. I shall give it a 10.

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2001-05-27 09:23 AM

That's sweet. A poem written just for two.
Melton

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2001-05-28 05:37 PM

Very lovely! So romantic!

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

7 posted 2001-05-29 10:23 PM

This paints a very warm picture for me. I love the closeness you are able to express. Another of your heartfelt works for my library.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

8 posted 2001-05-29 10:26 PM

Ooops, i forgot to add this the first time.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

RebeccaJoy
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 35

9 posted 2001-05-30 08:14 PM

Very gentle and heartfelt.

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

10 posted 2001-05-30 08:44 PM

thanks so much to all of you for your
very kind comments.....they do
mean very much to me...thanks
for reading...and replying

you have made my day!

mistyrose~*

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2001-05-30 09:36 PM

I love reading and thinking about the seashore!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted