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Double Cross
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since 2001-05-23
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Rochester, ny

0 posted 2001-05-26 03:24 AM


Trouble in Paradise

By: Theodore C. VanSon Jr.


Lately your cryings been worrying me
Thoughts of you leaving are visions i see
Thats door you've been watching can't hold you forever
So please, its me, you need to rememeber

I can't hide what i've been feelin inside
I've been wondering if its a mistake
Many of years dealing with the tides
A wave, my heart, i just couldnt take

It's a twister in the desert just running free
A run of bad luck thats been following me
Like a gambler rollin his tricky dice
Oh lord, theres truble in our paradise

In your heart you've tried to be happy
Those dreams that you ride on the clouds up above
Can't attract me than your arms of love
I dont blame you, its me thats gone crazy

It's a twister in the desert just running free
A run of bad luck thats been following me
Like a gambler rollin his tricky dice
Oh lord, theres truble in our paradise

This old boy can be what you need
we've both had dreams go by easily
I'm begging you baby, dont lead me from this
Keep me prisioner in your fantasy

© Copyright 2001 Theodore C. VanSon Jr. - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2001-05-26 08:06 AM


Sad story, Good verse. Welcome to the Corner.
Melton

Denise
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2 posted 2001-05-26 08:45 AM


Wonderful lyrics, Theodore! Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions!
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2001-05-26 10:35 AM


Welcome.  Hope this turns out okay.  Joyce
lonely*soul
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4 posted 2001-05-26 10:15 PM


wow this was great, now i wanna hear some music behind it... great read~
              *KiMMiE*

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Member Patricius
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5 posted 2001-05-27 12:45 PM


Welcome to the site!  I enjoyed your song and hope it has a happy ending!

Betty Lou Hebert

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