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Packratmike
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0 posted 2001-05-25 01:41 PM


she said "what is this?"
i said "it's a love tanka."
she said "i love you."
i said "and i love you too"
we said "tanka."  "you're welcome."


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1 posted 2001-05-25 08:32 PM


This is cute Mike.  Joyce
Packratmike
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2 posted 2001-05-25 09:13 PM


Tanka very much.*G*
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3 posted 2001-05-25 10:10 PM


Mike:  I didn't expect that last line at all.
Very clever!

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4 posted 2001-05-26 08:08 AM


Good one. Made me smile.
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Denise
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5 posted 2001-05-26 08:46 AM


Cute, Mike!
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-05-26 04:11 PM


Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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7 posted 2001-05-26 05:01 PM


This was a great read. I really liked this one.

mistyrose
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8 posted 2001-05-26 09:39 PM


patrackmike...

oh so clever
very good!
definite smile
on my face
thanks


mistyrose~*

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9 posted 2001-05-27 12:12 PM


PackRatMike~

Just adorable
That's exactly what it is
So politely penned

~*Marge*~

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Panne447
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10 posted 2001-05-30 02:25 PM


Mike,
Very good. I liked a bunch. Panne

Packratmike
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11 posted 2001-05-30 03:34 PM


tanks to you all.*G*

Mike

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12 posted 2001-06-06 09:06 AM


Cute and clever...

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

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13 posted 2001-06-10 04:43 PM


Yep, cute and clever!
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