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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2001-05-24 08:17 PM


Genesis – Haiku

Embedded delight
Crafted gracefully perfect
Through which we see life

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2001-05-24 08:49 PM


oh, Ria, this is lovely! I feel that inner enthusiasm and am grateful for the gift of it! For through the eyes of inner joy all of life is a wonderment.  Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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2 posted 2001-05-25 03:33 AM


Well done on this one! You did a wonderful job on it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

brian madden
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ireland
3 posted 2001-05-25 02:35 PM


beautifully written, I am going to have to figure out Haikus some time.

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
as though they never exist"

nicky wire


Denise
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4 posted 2001-05-26 08:51 AM


Very good, Gloria! I wish I could write these. At this point, I wish I could write anything!
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