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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-05-22 07:25 PM


Dreams that follow swift,
From the stars scattered above,
Are first born wishes.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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Denise
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1 posted 2001-05-22 07:39 PM


Very nice!
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2 posted 2001-05-23 10:17 AM


aww thanks

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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3 posted 2001-06-16 12:08 PM


This is great...really great. I like it and I believe most of it, because dreams are related to wishes in the way that they give us hope.  

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4 posted 2001-06-16 06:03 AM


Oh very beautiful!

Maree  

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5 posted 2001-06-16 02:41 PM


oooo, this is so lovely...beautifully done haiku!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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6 posted 2001-06-17 08:39 PM



What a lovely thought!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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7 posted 2001-06-24 12:43 PM


i ditto whole-heartedly...
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8 posted 2001-06-24 08:24 PM


Thanks all for reading

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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