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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Such smooth surface- Like a wine glass, But no brandy- The texture holds, On it lives- Million souls, With the exemption- Of a few moles, Between the absence- Of light- The underbelly remains- Seemingly barren, Over the years- The texture fades, Leaving the changes- Constant. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
hence the phrase true beauty lies within some great images here, really enjoyed the poem. ======= Such smooth surface- Like a wine glass, But no brandy- The texture holds, On it lives- Million souls, The underbelly remains- Seemingly barren, Over the years- The texture fades, Leaving the changes- Constant. "across the unfair divide |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Brian I like your version better. I am thinking about using it. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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RebeccaJoy Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 35 |
Outstanding work. This is excellent writing, especially your ending. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ah, change, yes I know!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Rebecca, once again my thanks go out to you. Irish rose, thank you for leaving your thoughts. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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