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mistyrose
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-05-22 01:05 AM



move me
say
all the right things
to me
then dont refuse me
when i beg for more

delight me
your
words sound like
poetry to the
very depths
of me
when i ask for
more

don't abandon this
my love
you simply
can't resist
the sensation of
just one kiss
that i've left
upon your soul...



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2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2001-05-22 08:29 AM


Hey! When you're good... you're good.
Melton

mistyrose
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
2 posted 2001-05-22 11:18 AM


melton....

gosh..thanks

mistyrose~*

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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3 posted 2001-05-22 05:22 PM


Very nicely done!  i like it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-05-22 06:49 PM


OOOO nice

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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