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are you ready

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-05-19 04:22 PM

are you ready
to open your arms
to me
are you waiting
for me at all
if i stop
hiding
will you then
come seek me
will you trust
and believe me
for no reason at all

when
i stop
going the wrong direction
will you be there
to guide me
walk along beside me
are you ready
to open your life
for me----chances are
we will both
be happy
love
is where you've brought me

are you
ready...

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-20 01:21 AM

Interesting poem. It is sad that our own timidity can deprive us of the best things inlife, at times. Joyce

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-05-20 10:00 AM

MistyRose~
A cute and flirtatious piece.
I enjoyed the idea of hide and seek.

'will you trust
and believe me
for no reason at all'

Great map for love to follow ~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2001-05-21 01:57 AM

at first I thought it was about god by the first stanza, but then I realize it was about a emotion potrayed as a living being.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

4 posted 2001-05-21 10:38 PM

I like this, it really let me feel the wierd static of uncertain emotions between people.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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