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mistyrose
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-05-19 04:00 AM


climbing
between the sheets tonight
alone,
i pray
you are
please don't
forget how
it could have
felt
to not be
alone
and
afraid....


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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA
1 posted 2001-05-19 11:57 AM


Not so bad to be alone, but to be alone and afraid....OUCH!!!
Good one, mistyrose.*S*

Mike

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-05-19 12:02 PM


MistyRose~
Sending this thought ...
When in prayer ... I'm never alone ...
God is always there.

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-05-20 01:31 AM


We're all alone, a good part of our life, but God is always there as Marge says.  Joyce
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2001-05-20 02:13 PM


just remember no matter how alone you feel some one out there cares for you. enjoyed the read

There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong
inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode

Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19
Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea
5 posted 2001-05-21 11:59 PM


I love the way you wrote this, and i feel for those nights,  as i have spent them too.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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