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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-05-15 08:28 PM



Heartprints
~*Marge Tindal*~

Write ye now the verse
Lightly dance across the page
Vivid thoughts now found
Upon palette of inspire
Ink heartprints of the poet


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-05-15 08:47 PM


Ah Marge .... you've left many sweet heartprints on the page, and I've enjoyed reading each one ... this is lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2001-05-15 09:52 PM


This is so sweet.  Joyce
Songbird
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3 posted 2001-05-15 10:12 PM


Thank you for the lovely tanka.
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4 posted 2001-05-15 11:04 PM


Sooooo lovely, Marge!
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-05-15 11:17 PM


Kit~
I thank you kindly for such a sweet response.

Joyce~
Thanking you for enjoying it.

SongBird~
I appreciate your reply.
I'm always inspired by the works of others.

Denise~
I'd have known in a heartbeat that you'd enjoy it , sweet friend.
~*Marge*!\~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

kitkat
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6 posted 2001-05-16 10:59 AM


So lovely this Verse. One question? How do you get the images in your poetry..I have tried but cannot..E-mail me and let me know the secret :-)

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Tramp Poet
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7 posted 2001-05-16 11:54 AM


this is superb, Marge!
An excellant blend of
graphic and word.
thank you,

    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

obscurity of cloud
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8 posted 2001-05-17 11:26 AM


This is really sweet.  I love the title, it's very eyecatching.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-05-17 09:04 PM


KitKat~
Thank you for enjoying it.
I'll e-mail you this weekend.
SEND ME A REMINDER !
Meanwhile ... go to Members Area/Help
at the top of the Passions page
and read Ron's instructions on How To Use HTML ...

Daniel~
Thanks ... glad you enjoyed it.

ObscurityOfClouds~
Thank you ... and WELCOME to Passions.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

kcsgrandma
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10 posted 2001-05-19 10:55 AM


This is a great tanka, Marge.  Your heart leaves wonderful prints!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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11 posted 2001-05-19 12:10 PM


KCS~
Thank you ... I find the Tanka format so refreshingly challenging~
Appreciate your reply.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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