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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-05-15 06:19 PM


One voice only called to me
From out the teeming, restless sea
Of enmassed humanity.

One hand beckoned from afar.
It signalled like a blue quasar,
Drawing me to where you are.

One love forged before I knew
That somewhere in the world, was you.
Destiny and dreams come true!

One heart in the world alone
In which to merge and call my own.
Unity of blood and bone.

One life living side by side,
To weather every storm and tide.
You are my compass and my guide!


(I wrote this for my husband and will give it to him on our anniversary.)

Betty Lou Hebert

© Copyright 2001 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-15 07:01 PM


He should be pleased.  It is a very nice poem.  Joyce
Songbird
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2 posted 2001-05-15 08:00 PM


Very beautiful poem, and hope you have a happy aniversery.
Packratmike
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3 posted 2001-05-15 10:40 PM


A wonderful poem and a wonderful gift.  

Mike

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4 posted 2001-05-15 11:01 PM


I'm sure he will love it! Very nice! Happy Anniversary!
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5 posted 2001-05-16 02:10 AM


Trill, Your husband will be very thrilled to get this I am sure. Nice anniversary piece. Panne
Trillium
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6 posted 2001-05-16 07:01 PM


Thank you one and all for your nice comments on this poem.  It will be our 49th anniversary!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2004-01-11 04:22 PM


Would you like to take a wild guess as to who's reading stuff you posted 3 years ago?
This poem is neat!
Love, Barb

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8 posted 2004-01-11 11:33 PM


Dear Barb:  I wondered when I saw this one back on the current forum, who had resurrected it! Thank you!  You are my biggest fan!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2004-01-17 01:48 PM


a beautiful dedication
Trillium
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10 posted 2004-01-17 06:48 PM


passing shadows:  Thanks for commenting!

Betty Lou Hebert

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