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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-05-15 04:49 PM


Through this poems,
I keep myself-
         At peace,

My thoughts preceding
As saviors-
From                   illiteracy,

Meanings I advice,
Through the modes-
Of illusion,

Time    passes    by
As       my poems-
Are   s
       h
        a
         p
          e
           d
            .

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-15 07:03 PM


Nice.  I suspect we all have different approaches to our writing.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-05-15 07:23 PM


i thought I would use the page(in this case the screen) to write my poetry. The block style gets kinda old.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

wordancer
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3 posted 2001-05-22 06:56 AM


Now this was different way to go...a pox of the boredom of the block...  

WO

mistyrose
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4 posted 2001-05-22 02:32 PM


i like it!!!!!

mistyrose~*

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5 posted 2001-05-22 07:10 PM


oooo I like it, its definately different

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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6 posted 2001-05-23 12:08 PM


mistyrose, moon_dust and wordancer, I thank you all for replying.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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7 posted 2001-05-23 06:29 AM


Poetry,
One's therapy
To deal with the world at Large
Can so be
It's own entity-
Thus we create our own Stars!

Unusual, but enjoyable read,
         David

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

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