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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-11 01:11 AM

A snake atop a sound,
Gnawing through the mound,
Reaching across a timeless length,
Acknowledges their similar faith,

Peaking at me through its confusion,
Staring me down forever,

Seeking to free itself,
From what once seemed right,
Too late for it is chosen,
Asking for help endlessly,

The mound undisturbed,
Continues to stand…

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-12 04:48 PM

I can't quite picture this but there are no snakes except good garden snakes here. And I never even see one of those. Good poem, however. Joyce

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-05-13 01:44 PM

I am in reality using a fake snake and speakers to show a connection between the past(the snake) and the new technology(the new world)

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

3 posted 2001-05-22 06:52 AM

ah-ha, I see it once it was explained, perhaps the connection (the sound) needs to be a bit clearer so that we can grasp it. Interesting concept and image.

WO

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