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2dalimit
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0 posted 2001-05-10 11:26 PM



Unsuspecting fly
A spider creeps up behind
Window glass between


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Songbird
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1 posted 2001-05-10 11:29 PM


A great moment may we all be so fortunate!
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2001-05-11 05:33 PM


Cleverly done!  I enjoyed this.

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2001-05-12 04:39 PM


Happy fly.  Poor spider.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-05-15 06:45 AM


wonderful haiku...you made this so real! Ellie

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kitkat
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5 posted 2001-05-15 07:57 AM


You spun a tragic tale of woe for the spider. This was great.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

2dalimit
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6 posted 2001-05-15 02:34 PM


Thanks for reading. This scene actually occured in the laundromat.
But, aren't we all protected from unsuspecting evil at one time or another.
Melton

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7 posted 2001-05-18 12:06 PM


Clever for sure, but i was pulling for the spider.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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