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~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2001-05-10 03:06 PM

the day is new;
so a smile for you
and cheer
and laughter galore
but below the surface
deep down in my heart
there is always so much more

more than just smiles
and joy
and cheer
there's sadness
and pain
confusion
and fear

so don't always assume
that one's life is all well
what you see on the outside
is not enough to tell

there's always more
than meets the eye
hidden from view
deep down inside

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-05-10 04:46 PM

so don't always assume
that one's life is all well
what you see on the outside
is not enough to tell

So true are your words

Great poem!

Maree

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2001-05-10 10:16 PM

Very well expressed!

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

3 posted 2001-05-11 01:23 AM

i have the stragest feeling you followed me around today
your words are the absolute truth
thanks for sharing it with us
great work

mistyrose~

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-05-11 05:28 PM

Good poem. So true of most of us also.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-05-12 04:40 PM

Yes of us only let our best face show. Joyce

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

6 posted 2001-05-13 03:17 PM

Yes, Joce. may we always share our happiness with the the world, and our problems with God. Thank you all so much for your replies.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

7 posted 2001-05-15 06:51 AM

so very true ...and the pain will in God's Hands be healed..so that smile of ours will be deep into the core of us! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2001-06-24 12:53 PM

so true..can sure relate to that because i am one of those who rather put on a strong false front

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