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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mounting desire greets my fevered mind as I walk down the candy aisle each M&M, each Milky Way gives rise to my wanton smile Baby Ruth, Pay Day too all beckon me to a taste Snickers bars and Jujube’s that settle around my waist I pass them up for other things like carrots and celery sticks but hear them calling from the shelf those Red Vines and Pixie Stix Halloween is just around the bend so there’s plenty of bags in the store Candy Corn and Cracker Jacks and Peanut Butter Cups galore Then there will be Christmas Candy Canes are a sweet delight Homemade Fudge and Divinity dance in my dreams each night But I leave without a sweet being good for one more day knowing that again I’ve held those ‘candy cravings’ at bay! |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
I'm a sucker for Pay Days and Snickers....cute write, PdV and great willpower too.*S* Mike |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
If you ever slip and buy some candy, I'll help you eat it...  |
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Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
Such a sweeeeet little piece. I am in my "Sweet tart" phase... Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My gosh sharon...my blood sugar went up just reading this...just give me the carbs---cheese for me please! olives and Killigan's red...sigh, sigh, (serenity exits, remembering FOOD...) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wahoooo Sharon, This is great, love them Snicker Bars  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you! Thank you!! I posted this here because it seems this new Pub forum is quiet!!! HEY! Where is everyone???? |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Ummmm! I'm here, now. I had to go to the candy store, first (for some reason). Melton |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
ha ha ha! i can relate, as i see the other poets can too! great poem. i enjoyed it much! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delicious, Sharon! Yummy!! It has been kind of quiet in here, hasn't it? Come on, people, start posting those poems! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
GOOD, GOOD, GOOD !!! Titia "But I leave without a sweet being good for one more day" |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
It all sounds delicious to me! Most likely because I'm diabetic and can't have any of it! I have eaten my share in the past I'm sure. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Congratulations on unbelievable will power. This was a cute poem. Joyce |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This poem was just YUMMY!!! I use to love going to Grants(an old 5 n dime store) to visit their candy section s...Ah yes sweet memories.... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Three Muskateers....they're there i hope! Oh this was great, my sweet teeth are screaming for chocolate! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Just came back after a prolonged absence, and found this sweet treat. I'll take the m&m's please. Amazing what power a little bit of sugar and chocolate has!To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now you got me craving for chocolate  arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
I must confess that every now and then I fall victim to the Chocolate cravings. This is a well done, and well expressed piece of poetry, and it reminds me to get working on my willpower again. Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody. |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
For those of you who have had to quit the sweets--- I feel for you. I keep myself very low sugar. For those of you able to indulge.....well if you can't say anything nice... One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetDeVine~ "Lets all go to the lobby ! Let's all go to the lobby ! Let's all go to the lobby ! To get ourselves a treat !" Couldn't help but have a chocolate attack after reading this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wow, this sounds good, Sharon....and so early in the morning, too. I'd like a Zero candy bar or a Three Musketeers.....or some Hershey's Kisses with almonds...or... Man, I wish I had as much will power as you do, Sharon.  Hugs, Ethel |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
How did u do that???? My oh my I think I need to watch my trips to the marts too! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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