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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-07-30 05:56 PM


Give me just a minute to explain
How sorry I am that it didn't work out
Must have been the rain
Came and took our sun away
And remember if you will
That I love you still

And you could a hear a pin drop
When you walked in that house
Did you know what you were about to find?
My heart was the cheating kind
Can't go back in time
And free me from this crime
And I have no regrets
No I have no shame
Must be moving on
Cause my past is gone

And if you can't understand
How I feel
That's ok
Cause I can't explian any better
Must be human nature
Must not be the marrying kind
Just got to get it off mind

And you could a hear a pin drop
When you walked in that house
Did you know what you were about to find?
My heart was the cheating kind
Can't go back in time
And free me from this crime
And I have no regrets
No I have no shame
Must be moving on
Cause my past is gone

And our yesterdays left us
A long time ago
Our tomorrows we'll never see
Baby you had to know
No use crying
Baby dry your eyes
Couldn't have come as such a
Big surprise...

And everyone there knew
We were all thinking of
Some other lover
They didn't talk about it
Just laughed about it
And you thought you were the last to know
Should have seen it coming
No body to blame
Though it will never be the same
All of your so called friends
The things they'd say to me
Did they know how much I loved you
Baby to my heart I wasn't always true
And remember when the sun lights up your day
I carry your love with me along the way
But I must be on my way

And you could a hear a pin drop
When you walked in that house
Did you know what you were about to find?
My heart was the cheating kind
Can't go back in time
And free me from this crime

And I have no regrets
No I have no shame
Must be moving on
Cause my past is gone


Just remeber when you think of me
I had to be free
And I'll never talk bad about you
Cause I haven't got a clue
What happened between me and you....




Julie :)



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T McCoy
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186

1 posted 2000-07-30 06:36 PM


  Great writing Julie;  I could see this as a song pretty easily...maybe Rob Thomas could do one of his sing-a-longs with Brooks & Dunn.    
  
  And, I'm  happy to see you finally read my words and happier to see that you liked'em.  thank you...you said a lot of nice things and made me smile for sure  
  I do have a question though...if you have no regrets,  how could it be love?  

                  Tony
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- we're stuck...inside our own machines...apparitions -  Matthew Good

[This message has been edited by T McCoy (edited 07-30-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-30 07:39 PM


Hey, where ya been.  Nice to have you back.
Relationships are among the most difficult things in life and it takes two to constantly work at them or they go awry.  Nice read and glad you made it back.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-07-30 09:19 PM


JulieAnn...when the right man comes along faithfulness wont even be a question

never say never

JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
4 posted 2000-08-01 01:53 PM


Tony~~~Thank you and I would be in awe if Rob Thomas ever even consider singing a song I wrote!! But thank you it was sweet.....And as for your question.....when it is love turned bitter and you've made mistakes that can't be undone well it is just unhealthy to live with regrets....in other words to make a long story short...if you regreted your past then all of those years were wasted right??? anyway long story...thank you for your reply...

Mark~~~Thank you for the welcome back....It is nice to be back....And you are right....It DOES take 2!!!  

Paula~~~I know what you mean!! Where is he???

Julie :)



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