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my sleepless eyes ... |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
my sleepless eyes ... night has a way of capturing everything but my sleepless eyes find a certain harmony in knowing rain still makes a soothing fall even though you don't see drops through night's void songs of birds so heavy in early morn runs fast away from night's hunger but twilight pangs for every note morning glories bloom every dawn but hide their faces knowing night's dark charm and thieving ways please, night of tonight come like the kidnapper take hostage of my sleepless eyes beg, night keep your pact with morning's sun return them to me when you are done M.A. Miller 07.30.00 < !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Loved it all, because I DO understand, but the third verse was truly a thing of beauty...and may you yet sleep t'nite...oh...just checked the time...technically, I guess it's morning...LOL.. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Did I mention that this is really nice work? well, it is. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
MA oh how I can relate to this, I hate insomnia city. WOnderful piece. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
MM loved this thought knowing night's dark charm and thieving ways you said this perfectly... ~~softly smiling while trying to keep these tired eyes open Maureen |
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