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Through Waves of Time |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Crystal orbs dance 'pon the wing < !signature-->Of ever-tumbling breeze Housing dreams the angels bring From the flow of distant seas. Rolling raindrops grace the lea And glisten 'neath the grass Sunshine whispers come to me In threads of glittered glass. ...In my fantasies, I catch a glimpse of you... Within the dark of shadowed wood Your silhouette stands proud And in my heart I understood Why darkness was your shroud. With open arms I flew to you Sweet serenity our star And with the wildflowers grew Promises once known afar. "Let love be etched in silver ink And velvet be our touch Never let your tender heart think That another I could love so much." I've cherished you through waves of time And breathed you in every breath For without the thoughts of you each day My soul would have embraced death. ...We are now one...for always... *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Silkdragon Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 65 |
Wow, krista. Loved it. you're so good at this. i CANNOT rhyme poems. or rather, i can, they just really suck... LOL. You did a great job here! My favorite verse: "Within the dark of shadowed wood Your silhouette stands proud And in my heart I understood Why darkness was your shroud." Hee hee, sweet. I love the mystery of darkness. But that's just me, and I'm evil.  Loved this!Erin |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ You've such a lovely talent. It is always a pleasure to read you. 'Rolling raindrops grace the lea And glisten 'neath the grass Sunshine whispers come to me In threads of glittered glass.' Positively beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful poem my dear! Very sweet poem and so wonderfully written as always! I loved the verse "Within the dark of shadowed wood Your silhouette stands proud And in my heart I understood Why darkness was your shroud." and these two lines too, "Sunshine whispers come to me/In threads of glittered glass." Great poem! Much enjoyed Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Wonderful read, as always!  Gossamerwings ;) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Krista~ Flows of majestic quality...beautiful writings sweetie Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtaking, Krista! Very very beautiful! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh my! So wonderful. This reminds me of the first time I read one of your poems...I was in awe then and still am today. Your talent is incredible..as is this poem. |
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