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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Feather Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ * ~ ~ ~ On soft feathered whispering call a sigh so tender falls Lightly falling through your thoughts float me on feathers of remember Tenderly aloft and blown about playing upon your heartstrings Tugging in ardent recall through visions of the feather's fall Poofed just lightly, ever so lightly catch me descending or blow me away with whispered sighing from your wings fluttering to land in the nest of l o v e ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow! All I can say is Wow! Did I say Wow? Corinne |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
And falling ever so gently. Great poem, Marge.  |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a very peaceful and graceful poem, Marge. I really enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Your words drift slowly past me ears and softly land upon my heart. This was lovely my friend. I can see that feather now . . . sigh . . . Nice writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marge, I'd like to feather you And do the things you said How did you know, you clever girl, I had a featherbed???  |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Absolutely beautiful Marge! Such a nice, soft, airy feel about it. I just loved this one. Great Piece!! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ I think you just said the WOW word ! Thanks - thanks ! Eloise~ Thank you sweet lady. Nate, my friend~ I thought of you today. Good to see you and thanks for the reply. LoneWolf~ So pleased to know you enjoyed. Thank you. Balladeer~ Geeeeesh ! You told me not to tell ! Now here you are blabbing to the world ! Now EVERYBODY knows ! Just like a MAN ... feather and tell ! !  TennesseeAngel~ Thank you, hon. It fell so softly to the page. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--love the way you drew a feather with your words in two different ways...you blow me away! (and LOL to your reply to Balladeer) |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sheer beauty Marge...gorgeous words and a wondrous presentation...I stand in awe of your talent, as always. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow Marge, you've done it again. I'm just drifting along here on your words!God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I love this. So calm and peaceful, like a beautiful lullaby. You are truely talented. -vlraynes (vicky) "I have read your words, and with them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
nice play Marge ... a good fit for the graphic representation ... love it ... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You feathered me all the way through the whole piece Marge..........nice touch with the shaped poem.......super idea...and another great poem. take care....ethome.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Poof !  Love ya', my friend. Krista~ You are a dear to reply so sweetly. EagleOne~ Hope you are enjoying the 'drift'... if you 'get my drift' ! Thank you for your reply. VLRaynes~ Thank you. So glad to have you visit Open. Hope you'll consider posting here sometime. MAMiller~ Thanks. It was such a fun little piece to do. ETHome~ Like a feather, it softly fluttered and wrote itself. Glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Softly, softly Your words do flow To a soft gentle after glow So soft the words that you do sow Over the seas they gently go To land upon a thousands minds drifting slowly through passing times Love ya Marge wonderful poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love your feather and I love your poen, Exquisite in its presentation Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^}!! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie, my friend~ What a lovely reply to set my heart aglow Feathered thoughts of you so easily do flow I am so thankful to send thoughts across the miles To end upon your face as a beaming smile Lizzie~ Thank you, my friend. Karilea~ Right back to you, my friend. Love you all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I just love a soft feathery touch. Is that feather free to travel the winds? Loved to see your caressing words. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cool...and visually interesting! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Tugging in ardent recall through visions of the feather's fall " Oh Marge, I'm playing catch-up today ... I'm so glad I did not miss this beautiful and tender poem. Just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
~Marge~ lovely!  regards sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Feathering you with thoughts and thanks. PoetdeVine~ Thanks. Glad you found it interesting. Kit~ I'm so pleased that you 'caught-up' with this one too. Thank you. Sudhir~ Thank you for the happy reply. Pleases me to know that it pleased you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
i'm allergic to a feather when he tickles on my face... but i like wearing leather with a little bit of lace in storms and extreme weather i am very much at home but quite despite my allergy i really liked your pome  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
WOW, Marge! Don't know how I missed this. Kudos and much applause...love the poem, love the picture! Again...WOW! jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pandora~ Thank you for the cutesy reply. JWesley~ So very pleased that you enjoyed it, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge, I'm glad I found this poem and stopped in It is lovely. rosepetals25 |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
As always Marge--just beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ Me too ! KitKat~ Thank you, lady ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Me Lady Marge, This is so funny I was think alot about you today, there you were floating around in my head and now here you are once again speaking so wonderfully about love and heart strings, I miss you so much! Life keeps me from coming as much and for some reason I can't seem to get anything down on paper, but hopefully soon. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleCerenity~ My friend ... anytime you are thinking about me ... you can always drop me an e-mail. I send you thoughts to comfort you on days you may need them. See ... feathering thoughts do travel on spirit's wing ... finding the right heart. Love ya' gal ! *HUGS* to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Thank you friend, my heart needed a tender touch and some times it does not come from were you would think it should. But it never fails to be touched profoundly by you and others here at passions. Thank you so much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge, you are such a grace to the forum...you write such beauty, and share so generously...it's always a great pleasure to read your work. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ I have no other gift to give ... but please know that this heart holds you dear. Serenity~ And the same to you, my little friend. I love you dearly. *I've been double Cerenity/Serenity'd Now who could ask for more ! You both touch my heart. Love ya' gals ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...same wavelength for sure!!! Ha. That's incredible. Cool. I like being on the same wavelength as you. This poem is so airy and neat. It's surely one to read and read again. You're the best. Be well M. *Peace. *BTW,...when I did mine I had you in mind the whole time. With the shape I mean...not the angry people crying...hehee. Take care. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil'SpitFire~ Good ... glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for thinking of me ... as you know already, I enjoyed yours ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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