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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

0 posted 2000-07-29 08:33 PM



And still
there are depths of you
yet to be discovered in our succulent
savory hours of intimacy and pleasure. Our lovemaking has
never grown insipid, with always a new fantasy creeping round, and
a new craving sprouting up; no thorn has ever jabbed through
our coverlets of down; through decades of time we are
never the same; after all this time, we continue to
be each others’ best voyagers; nothing
ever has had the
chance
to
become
threadbare; my beloved
husband, my lover, the most unique to me;
my heart’s tender dale, my companion, sweetest mystery;
I love all the wandering corridors of your shifting motley emotions
and the velvet tongued fire-lit museums of your mind; I love
your lively underground meandering streams of stark
feelings flowing; and the fragrant woodland
campfires of our passions’ blaze.
I love who you are deep
inside.  I love
you.




[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 07-29-2000).]

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Toddles
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana
1 posted 2000-07-29 08:38 PM


Rosemary, Let me be one of the first to say "Excellent poem, flows well!"

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-29 08:41 PM


welcome back dear lady!!!!!
this is a wonderful declaration of your love
and it seems some of luckys presentation is rubbing off on you
(LITTERALLY by the content of this poem) LOL  
perfect RM.
glad to see your name back in these busy halls
take care jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-07-29 08:46 PM


Such a gentle longing, desire, passion, appreciation for all that Love has to offer...James
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2000-07-29 08:46 PM


Rosemary--The love you have takes so well to words description, words that come from that well spring that it inspires...you are lucky to be so completed...Hugs
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2000-07-29 10:01 PM


Rosemary~
So YOU !

'I love all the wandering corridors of your shifting motley emotions
and the velvet tongued fire-lit museums of your mind'

Hmmmmmm !
Museums Of Dale ...
Do they charge admission ?  

Good to see your smiling face, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Gossamerwings
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since 2000-07-18
Posts 207

6 posted 2000-07-29 10:49 PM


Wonderful description of true love.
~~~I love your lively underground meandering streams of stark feelings flowing; and the fragrant woodland campfires of our passions’ blaze.I love who you are deep inside.I love
you.~~~
Beautiful writing and expressions of feelings!



Gossamerwings ;)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

7 posted 2000-07-29 11:21 PM


Oh but a "wow" does not suffice, but you know already how I feel about this one---in awe of your talent, and most desirous of such inspiration...I keep looking, Rosemary...grins to you...a lovely poet you are...
lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
8 posted 2000-07-30 02:54 AM


Oh Rosey Magoo, you've done it again. I love it baby. Do you think you can write something about (((?))) next time..? HA..! lol... I love you dearly bubba...

All my Love, Dale



[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 07-30-2000).]

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
9 posted 2000-07-30 05:44 AM


Rosemary wonderful poem to your dearest Dale   very loving and tender piece
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
10 posted 2000-07-30 08:47 AM



Oh, how I've missed Rosemary's descriptive passages ,leading us naked through cool mountain streams, into an enticing drizzling shower, and now between the transparent sheets of ecstasy. This is vertual reality, my friends, of close encounters of the poetic kind.
Very well written, my dear. I think it deserves another read.(Or am I just being nosey?
Liz

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
11 posted 2000-07-30 01:15 PM


Toddles, Janet Marie, jmlee 12345, Martie, Marge, Gossamerwings, serenity, lucky, tracie66, and Elizabeth Santos - thank you all so much for your kind comments, and appreciation!  I appreciate them more than I can say!  I always keep them, and treasure them.  You warm my heart!  (And, lucky - Dale, a special thanks to you - my dearest love, and inspiration.)



The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.


EWDrake
Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183
NC, USA
12 posted 2000-07-30 02:45 PM


Beautifully clear images, Rosemary, such a heartfelt tribute that one almost feels voyueristic daring to read it ~~ then reads it again nonetheless!

EWDrake


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
13 posted 2000-07-30 02:53 PM


love all the wandering corridors of your shifting motley emotions
and the velvet tongued fire-lit museums of your mind; I love
your lively underground meandering streams of stark
feelings flowing; and the fragrant woodland
campfires of our passions’ blaze.

WOW Rosemary, a beautiful poem. really beautiful.

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

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